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28/52 - Breeze

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I'm so sorry about my absence lately, but my computer was making my life hard and didn't find the time to take photos :( Also Photoshop hasn't been installed properly and until then there won't be a watermark on my pictures, I hope I can fix this soon!
So I won't skip the last week I didn't upload anything, but instead I will just make the project a week longer :)

:camera: Canon EOS 60D
lens: Canon 50mm f/1.8

Comments and Favourites are very appreciated!
Enjoy!
Image size
900x750px 155.11 KB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS 60D
Shutter Speed
1/2048 second
Aperture
F/1.8
Focal Length
50 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Jul 26, 2015, 4:00:01 PM
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:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

What I enjoyed most about this photograph is the bokeh in the background of the image. The colors throughout the image work well together as they blend in the background with the use of perspective. I do wish that the flower popped a little more in comparison to the background.

However, an aspect that I feel is distracting is the particular type of blur that is on the image. The vertical streaks I feel distract from the bokeh effect in the background as well as from the image of the flower in the foreground. Perhaps this is because the flower is so dainty on its own? I would try either adding a softer overall blur effect like in the photo 18/52 Longing that you have or even cropping the image down to bring more attention to the flower.

Overall, I think if you found a way to illuminate the daintiness of the flower in the foreground and soften the background to fit it's daintiness I think it would improve the image. Otherwise, the colors in the background are perfect as well as the bokeh effect.